


REAL Ghost Stories
THE MARIALUISA STORY
By RICHARD J O'HANLON JR.
THIS SEGMENT TAKEN FROM MY LATEST STORY ENTITLED "HER FINAL
DAYS" IS THE CHILLING SAGA OF WHAT HAD OCCURED TO MY FILIPINO DAUGHTER
ON THAT HORRIBLE NIGHT OF OCTOBER 30 IN 1998. I AM GOING TO START
BY GIVING YOU THE ACCOUNT OF WHAT HAD HAPPENED FROM THE PREVIOUS
NIGHT ON OCTOBER 29TH AND RELIVE EVERY EVENT OF THE FOLLOWING DAY
AND CONTINUING INTO AND THROUGHOUT THE FOLLOWING NIGHT..HERE IS
THE STORY FROM 9:00 PM THURSDAY NIGHT ON...I MET LUISA IN OSMENA
PARK IN QUEZON CITY LIKE WE HAD DONE THE PREVIOUS NIGHT. SHE & I
WERE NOW BECOMING VERY CLOSE TO EACH OTHER NOT JUST AS A "FATHER/DAUGHTER"
BUT IT WAS LOOKING MORE LIKE A BOYFRIEND/GIRLFRIEND RELATIONSHIP.
LUISA AND I WENT TO A RESTAURANT WHICH PLAYED ALL THE POP MUSIC
FROM THE 1980'S. IT WAS HERE AFTER A COUPLE OF HOURS THAT SHE MET
ONE OF HER CO-WORKERS FROM HER MODELING STUDIO, WHERE LUISA HAD
BEEN RECENTLY HIRED TO WORK AS ONE OF THE "COVER MODELS." TERESITA
ALONG WITH HER BOYFRIEND THEN INFORMED LUISA THAT SHE HAD NO!
TICED THAT SOMEONE WAS WATCHING
US. TESSIE RECOGNIZED HIM AS A FRIEND OF LUISA'S MOTHER AND AUNT.
HE HAD BEEN HIRED BY THEM TO KEEP A WATCH ON MY MOVEMENTS AS I WAS
NOT ALLOWED TO HAVE ANY CONTACT WITH MY FILIPINO DAUGHTER NOW THAT
HER MOTHER & I WERE DIVORCED AND AFTER THE SCENE WHICH TOOK PLACE
AT THE HARRISON PLAZA SHOPPING MALL BETWEEN LUISA, HER SISTER JUVITA
LOTA FEDERESSO, AND HER MOTHER WHEN I GAVE BOTH GIRLS SOME MONEY
SO THEY COULD BUY SOME JEWELRY WHICH THEY BOTH WANTED. LUISA THEN
BECAME VERY WORRIED WHEN TESSIE INFORMED HER OF THIS AND SHE WANTED
ME TO WALK WITH HER BACK HOME TO HER APARTMENT, LOCATED A SHORT
DISTANCE AWAY IN QUEZON CITY. LUISA AND I THEN MADE PLANS TO MEET
EACH OTHER AT ONE OF THE VICTORY LINER BUS TERMINALS IN MANILA THE
NEXT DAY AS SHE WANTED ME TO ACCOMPANY HER UP TO HER SISTER'S HOME
LOCATED IN THE PROVINCE OF PAMPANGA.( ABOUT 50 MILES NORTH OF METRO
MANILA.) SHE & I PROMISED EACH OTHER THAT WE'D MEET AT THE BUS DEPOT
BY NO LATER THAN 5:45 PM THE NEXT DAY( FRIDAY OCT.30TH.) WITH A HUG AND A GOOD-NIGHT KISS WE PARTED UNBEKNOWNING TO ME THAT THIS WOULD BE THE LAST
TIME I WOULD EVER TALK TO HER AGAIN. THE NEXT MORNING, I ALONG WITH
MARIAMELDA'S BROTHER, NAMED ROGELIO & HIS WIFE, LORNA WERE INVITED
TO ENCARNACION MATUBA'S HOME LOCATED IN ANOTHER SECTION OF METRO
MANILA KNOWN AS PACO. MARIAMELDA, MY NOW EX-WIFE & LUISA'S MOTHER
WAS ALSO STAYING AT HER HOME. WE ARRIVED THERE BY NOON AND FOR AWHILE
ALL SEEMED TO BE GOING NORMAL. AT ABOUT 3:00 PM, MARIAMELDA,ALONG
WITH HER AUNT ENCARNACION, AND ROGELIO'S WIFE, LORNA LEFT FOR WHAT
THEY TOLD US, WAS TO DO SOME GROCERY SHOPPING AND THAT THEY WOULD
BE BACK IN A COUPLE OF HOURS. ( THIS IS WHERE ROGELIO FIRST NOTICED
THAT SOMETHING SUSPICIOUS WAS OCCURING.) A FEW MINUTES AFTER THEY
LEFT, ROGELIO INFORMED ME THAT HE HAD NOTICED THAT MARIA WAS CARRYING
A BROWN BUSINESS SIZED ENVELOPE WITH HER. HE ALSO MENTIONED THAT
HE THOUGHT THAT HE'D SEEN HER STUFFING SOMETHING WHICH LOOKED LIKE
CLIPPINGS FROM A MAGAZINE INTO IT BUT HE DID NOT WANT TO SAY ANY MORE SINCE HE WAS NOT SURE OF WHAT IT REALLY WAS THAT SHE( MARIA) WAS DOING IN THE KITCHEN.
OUR SUSPICION BECAME DEEPER AN HOUR LATER WHEN LORNA RETURNED HOME.
SHE WAS ALONE! BOTH ROGELIO & I WERE NOW VERY CURIOUS AS TO WHY
LORNA RETURNED ALONE! THIS WAS THE BEGINNING OF WHAT WOULD BECOME
A HORRIBLE NIGHT!) LORNA INFORMED US THAT SHE WAS WITH THE OTHER
TWO WAITING IN THE CHECK OUT LINE WHEN SHE DISCOVERED THAT SHE HAD
FORGOTTEN SOME SOY SAUCE. SHE WENT BACK AND GOT A BOTTLE AND HAD
GOTTEN BACK IN LINE. SHE HAD NOT BEEN GONE MORE THAN TEN MINUTES
WHEN SHE THEN NOTICED THAT MARIA & ENCAR WERE GONE! AFTER GOING
THROUGH THE CHECK OUT LINE AND PAYING FOR THE SOY SAUCE, SHE WAITED
AROUND TO SEE IF THE OTHER TWO WOULD SHOW UP BUT THEY DID NOT. SHE
EXPLAINED THAT SHE BEGAN TO LOOK FOR THEM BUT THEY WERE NO WHERE
TO BE SEEN. WE THEN ASKED LORNA IF MARIA WAS CARRYING A BUSINESS-SIZED
ENVELOPE WHEN SHE HAD LAST SEEN HER. SHE SAID YES SHE WAS BUT SHE
WAS VERY SECRETIVE AS TO WHAT WAS INSIDE THE ENVELOPE. WHEN S!
HE COULD NOT FIND THE OTHER
TWO, LORNA DECIDED TO CATCH A TAXI BACK HERE TO ENCAR'S HOME. ANOTHER
HOUR WENT BY,I NOW HAD TO FIND SOME EXCUSE TO BRAKE AWAY AND GET
OVER TO THE BUS STATION WHERE LUISA & I PROMISED TO MEET EACH OTHER
BY 5:45 PM. THEN CAME THE BRAKE I NEEDED. ROGELIO WANTED TO GO TO
THE OFF TRACK BETTING PARLOR ON MALOLOS ST. AND DO SOME BETTING
ON A HORSE RACE. THE PARLOR WAS LOCATED RIGHT ACROSS THE STREET
FROM THE VICTORY LINER BUS TERMINAL WHERE LUISA TOLD ME TO MEET
HER.THERE WAS A RESTAURANT LOCATED THERE ALSO AND SO WE THOUGHT
THAT WE'D HAVE DINNER THERE WHILE ROGELIO WENT TO DO SOME BETTING
(AND I WOULD WAIT FOR MY FILIPINO DAUGHTER OR HAVE HER JOIN IN WITH
US IF SHE WAS ALREADY THERE.) AFTER A HASTY 40 MINUTE TAXI RIDE
THROUGH THE BUSY MANILA RUSH HOUR TRAFFIC, WE ARRIVED AT THE MALOLOS
STREET OFF TRACK BETTING PARLOR. THE BUS STATION,LOCATED RIGHT ACROSS
THE STREET WAS VERY CROWDED AS IT USUALLY IS ON A FRIDAY AFTERNOON
RUSH HOUR. AS USUAL I WAS HERE BEFORE LUISA BUT AS OF YET, I WAS NOT CONCERNED SINCE LUISA HAD THIS HABIT OF SHOWING UP RIGHT AT THE LAST MINUTE! THE TIME WAS
NOW 5:35 PM. LUISA SPECIFICALLY MENTIONED THAT SHE WANTED TO ARRIVE
AT JUVITA'S HOUSE BEFORE IT GOT TOO LATE. LOOKING AT THE BUS DEPARTURE
SCHEDULES TO ANGELES CITY, PAMPANGA THERE WAS A BUS LEAVING AT 6:10
PM AND ANOTHER LEAVING THREE HOURS LATER..AT 9 PM (WHICH WAS THE
LAST ONE UNTIL EARLY THE NEXT MORNING.) I BEGAN TO LOOK AROUND JUST
TO SEE IF LUISA HAD ARRIVED HERE BUT THERE WAS NO SIGN OF HER ANYWHERE
IN THE CROWD. BY 6:00 PM THE BUS FOR ANGELES CITY WAS BOARDING AND
GETTING READY TO LEAVE.I HAD PURCHASED OUR TICKETS BUT LUISA WAS
STILL NOT HERE. SHE WAS NOW OVER 20 MINUTES LATE! AGAIN, I LOOKED
AROUND TO SEE IF I COULD SEE HER IN THE CROWD( LUISA WAS A VERY
PRETTY(MORE LIKE BEAUTIFUL) FILIPINO GIRL.SHE STOOD OUT IN A CROWD
WITH HER LONG, BLACK HAIR, POLYNESIAN FACIAL COMPLEXION, AND BIG,
BROWN EYES.!) BUT SHE WAS NO WHERE TO BE SEEN. AT 6:15 PM THE BUS
LEFT. WHERE WAS LUISA? I BEGAN TO GET CONCERNED ALON!
G WITH ROGELIO & LORNA. "WELL SHE MAY HAVE HAD SOMETHING COME UP ON HER JOB." ROGELIO EXPLAINED,
'LET'S JUST WAIT AROUND FOR AWHILE AND SEE IF SHE'LL EVENTUALLY
SHOW UP." ALTHOUGH WE WERE NOT YET TERRIBLY CONCERNED AT THIS MOMENT,
I THEN EXPLAINED TO ROGELIO & LORNA THAT LUISA WAS ALWAYS VERY GOOD
ABOUT KEEPING APPOINTMENTS WHEN SHE MADE THEM IN THE PAST. IF SHE
COULD NOT MAKE IT..THERE WOULD BE A TELEGRAM OR SOME OTHER TYPE
OF URGENT MESSAGE THAT SHE COULD NOT MAKE IT..BUT AS OF NOW THERE
WAS NOTHING! AN HOUR WENT BY, STILL NO SIGN OF HER! WE BEGAN TO
GET MORE CONCERNED AS THE HOURS WENT ON. "DO YOU THINK THAT LUISA
MAY HAVE GOTTEN INTO SOME KIND OF TROUBLE BETWEEN HERE AND WHERE
SHE LIVES IN QUEZON CITY?" I ASKED ROGELIO. "HINDE KO ALAM." ( I
DON'T KNOW) WAS HIS REPLY LORNA THEN SAID, "LET'S NOT GET TOO WORRIED
JUST YET. IF SHE IS NOT HERE BY THE TIME THE LAST BUS LEAVES FOR
ANGELES CITY AT NINE O'CLOCK, WE WILL GO BACK TO ENCAR'S HOUSE IN
PACO AND TELL THEM THAT WE GOT INVOLVED IN THE HORSE RACES. WE!
'LL THEN TRY TO GET AHOLD OF THE
LANDLADY OF THE APARTMENTS WHERE SHE(LUISA)LIVES AND FIND OUT IF
SHE IS HOME IN HER APARTMENT. NINE O'CLOCK CAME, THE LAST BUS LEFT
FOR PAMPANGA, THERE WAS STILL NO SIGN OR MESSAGE FROM LUISA! WE
TOOK A TAXI BACK TO PACO AND ARRIVED AT ENCAR'S HOME BY A LITTLE
BEFORE 10 PM. MARIA & ENCAR WERE CURIOUS AS TO WHAT HAD HAPPENED
TO US BUT THEY JUST LAUGHED WHEN WE SAID THAT WE WERE BETTING ALL
EVENING. MARIA& ENCAR THEN WENT UPSTAIRS TO THERE BEDROOMS BY 10:40
PM. SUDDENLY THE TELEPHONE RANG...IT WAS CHRIS DELEON (LUISA'S FIANCE
AND MOVIE CELEBRITY.) HE HAD JUST RETURNED FROM HIS WEEK-LONG MOVIE
SHOOT ON ONE OF THE OTHER ISLANDS AND WAS CURIOUS TO KNOW WHY LUISA
WAS NOT AT HOME IN HER QUEZON CITY APARTMENT LIKE SHE WOULD NORMALLY
BE AT THIS LATE HOUR OF THE NIGHT. NOW ALL THREE OF US WERE VERY
CONCERNED...LUISA WAS NOT IN HER APARTMENT! CHRIS THEN ASKED TO
SPEAK TO ME...MARIA THEN HANED THE PHONE TO ME AND I SPOKE TO CHRIS..HIS
FIRST QUESTION HE ASKED ME WAS WHEN WAS THE LAST TIME THAT I HAD SEEN LUISA...I HAD TO EXPLAIN TO HIM THAT I HAD LAST SEEN HER ON THE PREVIOUS NIGHT.
AFTER TELLING HIM THAT SHE WANTED ME TO MEET HER IN OSMENA PARK
BECAUSE SHE WAS WORRIED THAT SOMEONE WAS WATCHING & FOLLOWING HER
AROUND, CHRIS THEN ASKED ME TO MEET HIM AT OSMENA PARK. ROGELIO
THEN OFFERED TO COME JOIN US TO HELP SEARCH FOR LUISA. BY 11:30
PM, ROGELIO AND I MET CHRIS DELEON ALONG WITH A CLOSE FRIEND OF
HIS WHOSE NAME WAS MANOY. FROM OSMENA PARK, WE ALL WALKED OVER TO
LUISA'S APARTMENT. IT WAS NOT MORE THAN A FIFTEEN MINUTE WALK. WHEN
WE KNOCKED ON THE DOOR..HER ROOMMATE, NAMED JOSIE ANSWERED THE DOOR
AND INVITED US IN. JOSIE'S STORY WAS THE BEGINNING OF THE HORROR..."A
LAS CINCO ETC..(ENGLISH: AT ABOUT FIVE O'CLOCK I ARRIVED HOME FROM
WORK. I NOTICED THAT THE DOOR WAS OPENED A LITTLE. WHEN I WALKED
IN I SAW AN OPEN BOTTLE OF PILLS LYING ON THE FLOOR. IT WAS HALF-
EMPTY! SOMEONE HAD SWALLOWED OVER HALF OF THEM....WELL JOSIE HAD
ONLY ONE ROOMMATE..LUISA! JOSIE THEN WENT ON TO EXPLAIN.." WHEN I WALKED INTO THE LIVING ROOM, I JUST HAPPENED TO LOOK INTO LUISA'S ROOM. ALL F HER CLOTHES WERE
A MESS ALL OVER HER BED AND ON THE FLOOR. HER LIP-STICK CASE ALONG
WITH HER EYESHADOW KIT WERE LYING THERE, HER JEWELRY BOX WAS OPENED
AND SOME OF HER BRACELETS, NECKLACES, AND OTHER JEWELRY WERE MISSING
AND THE OTHERS WERE JUST LYING ON THE FLOOR. HER ROOM WAS A TOTAL
MESS.. THEN I NOTICED THAT HER MARIACLARA GOWN WAS GONE. JOSIE THEN
WENT ON TO EXPLAIN THAT FROM WHAT SHE COULD SEE...LUISA WAS "FIXING
HERSELF" AS IF SHE WAS GOING TO SOMEWHERE FORMAL! THIS WAS NOT ONLY
CONFUSING BUT FRIGHTENING...WHERE IN THE HELL WOULD SHE BE GOING
TO INSTEAD OF TO THE BUS DEPOT?" I ASKED MYSELF. JOSIE WAS AFRAID
NOW AND HESITATED TO SAY ANYTHING MORE. SHE THEN TOLD US TO GET
A HOLD OF THE LANDLADY OF THESE APARTMENTS AND ASK HER. WHEN WE
DID, THE LANDLADY KNEW NOTHING BUT SHE THEN IN TURN TOLD US TO IMMEDIATELY
GET IN CONTACT WITH ADELIA PUGANAN WHO WAS THE HOUSEMAID OF THIS
APARTMENT COMPLEX SINCE SHE HAD BEEN HERE WORKING ALL DAY & EVENING. AFTER SOME RUNING AROUND, WE FOUND ADELIA'S APARTMENT AND KNOCKED ON HER DOOR.
ADELIA WAS HOME AND INVITED US IN....ADELIA'S STORY PUT THE PIECES
OF THE HORROR JIG-SAW PUZZLE TOGETHER..HERE WERE HER WORDS(TRANSLATED
INTO ENGLISH: "SIGUE..AT EIGHT O'CLOCK THIS EVENING I WENT OUT TO
WATER THE FLOWERS IN THE BACKYARD. I SAW HER(LUISA)SITTING ON THE
GROUND WITH HER HEAD BURIED IN HER ARMS & RESTING ON A BENCH...SHE
WAS DRESSED UP IN HER WHITE MARIACLARA GOWN AND SHE LOOKED SO BEAUTIFUL!
BUT SHE WAS CRYING OUT LOUD!I THEN WENT OVER TO SEE IF I COULD HELP
HER I ASKED HER WHAT WAS WRONG BUT SHE DID NOT SAY ANYTHING AND
JUST KEPT CRYING. "SOMEHOW MARIA & ENCAR WERE INVOLVED IN THIS."
IS WHAT NOW FLASHED ACROSS MY MIND. ADELIA WENT ON...." TWO HOURS
LATER I WAS GETTING READY TO GO HOME WHEN I SAW LUISA COMING DOWN
THE STAIRS FROM HER APARTMENT. SHE WAS DRESSED UP SO BEAUTIFUL IN
HER GOWN, SHE HAD A DIAMOND STUDDED CAMEO NECKLACE AROUND HER NECK
AND A BOUQUET OF FLOWERS IN HER HAIR....I WAS CURIOUS AS TO WHERE SHE WAS GOING TO AT THIS LATE HOUR...I ASKED HER...SHE DID NOT SAY MUCH EXCEPT SHE
SAID IN A SOFT & SHAKEY VOICE.."PAALAM KO MOM" WHICH MEANS "GOOD-BYE"
FOREVER TO YOU. WHEN I ASKED HER WHERE SHE WS GOING AT THIS HOUR
OF THE NIGHT, CHOKING BACK TEARS, SHE SAID THAT SHE WAS GOING OFF
TO SACRIFICE VALLEY! ... WHEN WE HEARD THIS, OUR HEARTS LITERALLY
STOPPED BEATING!!! CHRIS, ROGELIO, MANOY, AND MYSELF WERE BEYOND
HORROR STRUCK!!!RECALLING THAT LUISA WAS FRIGHTENED AT THE VERY
MENTION OF THE NAME "SACRIFICE VALLEY" THIS WAS NOW EVIDENT OF SOME
KIND OF DEMON SUMMONING! SACRIFICE VALLEY, LOCATED IN THE MOUNTAINS
OF BATAAN PROVINCE NORTHWEST OF METRO MANILA, WAS KNOWN AS A RELIGIOUS
AREA WHERE MANY PEOPLE WENT TO PRAY AND ASK FOR FORGIVENESS FROM
THE LORD.. MIRACLES WERE KNOWN TO HAVE OCCURED THERE ...BUT AT NIGHT
IT BECAME A DWELLING PLACE OF THE DEVIL! STRANGE APPEARANCES WERE
KNOWN TO HAVE OCCURED THERE INCLUDING A VISION OF WHAT THE FILIPINOS
REFER TO AS THE "KAMATAYAN" OR UGLY FACE OF SATAN ACTU!
ALLY APPEARING IN THE LATE NIGHT SHADOWS...PEOPLE WHO VENTURED THERE AT NIGHT WERE NEVER SEEN
AGAIN.. ADELLIA ASKED WHY SHE WAS GOING THERE.. LUISA THEN SAID
THAT HE WAS BEING CALLED!!! "WHO WAS CALLING YOU?" ADELLIA ASKED...LUISA
ANSWERED, "IT IS SOME KIND OF A VOICE" ADELLIA THEN SAID THAT LUISA
LEFT WELL OVER AN HOUR AGO.. ADELLIA THEN WXPLAINED TO US THAT THE
ONLY WAY LUISA WAS GOING TO SACRIFICE VALLEY TONIGHT WAS BY TRICYCLE..
WAISTING NO MORE TIME, WE ALL RAN OUT TO CATCH A JEEPNEY TO THE
NEAREST TRICYCLE STATION IN THE HOPES OF FOLLOWING LUISA UP TO SACRIFICE
VALLEY AND GET THERE IN TIME TO RESCUE HER FROM WHAT IT WAS THAT
WAS CALLING HER. THE JEEPNEY DRIVER TOLD US THAT HE HAD SEEN ANOTHER
JEEPNEY EARLIER THAT EVENING RIGHT IN FRONT OF HIM WITH A GIRL DRESSED
IN WHITE. HIS DESCRIPTION OF HER CLEARLY MATCHED THAT OF LUISA.
HE TOOK US RIGHT TO THE TRICYCLE STATION WHERE HE HAD SEEN THE OTHER
JEEPNEY DROP HER OFF.. HE SAW HER THEN GET INTO A TRICYCLE AND SPEED
OFF INTO THE DARKNESS...IT APPEARED TO BE HEADED IN THE DIRECTION OF BATAAN..WE ALL CAUGHT TWO TRICYCLES AND FOLLOWED WHAT WE HOPED
WS THE SAME ROUTE THAT THE TRICYCLE CARRYING LUISA HAD TAKEN EARLIER...THE
ROADS IN AND AROUND MERO MANILA WERE SMOOTH, WELL LIT UP, AND EASILY
MANUVERIBLE BUT WHEN WE GOT CLOSER TO BATAAN'S MOUNTAIN AREA (WHERE
SACRIFICE VALLEY WAS) THEY GOT VERY ROUGH AND WINDING AND AT TIMES
IT WAS TOTALLY DARK EXCEPT FOR A HALF- MOON. A SHORT DISTANCE BEFORE
WE GOT TO THE ENTRANCE TO SACRIFICE VALLEY, WE THOUGHT THAT WE COULD
SEE ANOTHER TRICYCLE WELL OUT AHEAD OF US....THIS HAD TO BE THE
ONE CARRYING LUISA..THEN SUDDENLY WE HAD TO STOP WHEN A PIG WAS
SEEN RIGHT IN THE MIDDLE OF THE ROAD...AFTER "SHEWING HIM OFF THE
ROAD, WE CONTINUED ON BUT BY NOW THE OTHER TRICYCLE AHEAD OF US
WAS LONG GONE. ARRIVING AT THE ENTRANCE TO SACRIFICE VALLEY, WE
ALL GOT OUT PAID THE DRIVER, AND BRIEFLY LOOKED AROUND TO GET OUR
BEARINGS HERE SINCE IT WAS IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT AND TOTALLY
DARK..AND LOOKING VERY MYSTERIOUS! THE TROPICAL HALF-MOO!
N WAS OF SOME HELP BUT IT WAS OCCASIONALLY BEING HIDDEN BY TOWERING CUMULOUS CLOUDS AS A LINE
OF TROPICAL THUNDERSTORMS WAS APPROACHING FROM THE EAST. IN THE
DISTANCE OFF TO THE EAST, AN OCCASIONAL FLICKER OF DISTANT LIGHTNING
WAS SEEN. WE ALL GOT READY TO BEGIN OUR SEARCH FOR LUISA..AS WE
WALKED AROUND ROGELIO TRIPPED OVER SOMETHING ON THE GROUND..LOOKING
DOWN HE SAW THAT IT WAS A LADY'S SHOE! LUISA WAS DEFINATELY HERE
SOMEWHERE! A FEW MINUTES LATER WE FOUND THE OTHER SHOE A FEW FEET
AWAY...SHE HAD TAKEN THEM OFF AND WAS WALKING BAREFOOT DOWN INTO
SACRIFICE VALLEY. THIS WAS NOW GETTING EVEN MORE MYSTERIOUS...A
YOUNG GIRL WALKING ALONE BAREFOOT IN THRE DARKNESS IN THIS MYSTERIOUS
PLACE. AFTER CHECKING TO SEE IF HIS FLASHLIGHT WORKED WE DECIDED
THAT DUE TO THE DANGERS OF WALKING DOWN THE NARROW AND STEEP ROCKY
PATHWAY LEADING INTO THE VALLEY THAT TWO OF US WOULD GO THERE AND
THE OTHER TWO HAD BETTER STAY UP AT THE BEGINNING OF THE PATH..
CHRIS & I DECIDED TO GO WHILE ROGELIO & MANOY REMAINED. STARTING DO!
WN THE PATHWAY, WE HAD TO BE ESPECIALLY CAREFUL THAT WE DID NOT TRIP AND FALL BECAUSE A FALL HERE
COULD EASILY MEAN A BROKEN LEG. WE KEPT CALLING OUT HER NAME..THERE
WAS NO REPLY. WE KEPT WALKING ON THEN CHRIS SUDDENLY SAW WHAT APPEARED
TO BE SOMEONE WELL OUT AHEAD OF US. SHE WAS DRESSED IN WHITE AND
WALKING SLOWLY...MY GOD IT WAS LUISA! WE YELLED OUT HER NAME AS
LOUD AS WE COULD AND TRIED TO WALK FASTER BUT THE STEEPNESS OF THE
PATH MADE IT TOO DANGEROUS. LUISA SEEMED TO BE WALKING TOWARDS SOMETHING
BUT AS OF YET WE COULD NOT SEE ANYTHING MORE THAN JUST TREES AND
BUSHES...AT THAT MOMENT, THE MOON CAME OUT ILLUMINATING THE JUNGLE...IN
THE DISTANCE WE BOTH SAW WHAT APPEARED TO BE THE SHADOW OF A GIANT
STATUE. "WHAT WAS THIS NOW?" WE BOTH ASKED EACH OTHER. WE COULD
NOT EASILY MAKE OUT WHAT IT WAS BUT IT APPEARED TO RESEMBLE A GIANT
"TIKI" ( A STATUE OF A GOD WHICH WAS BUILT BY THE ANCIENT ABORIGINAL
PEOPLE WHO INHABITED THIS AREA ABOUT 20,000 YEARS AGO.) A FEW MINUTES
LATER, LUISA STOOD AT THE BOTTOM OF THE HILL. SHE WAS NOW RIGHT IN FRONT OF THE "TIKI" SHE STOOD MOTIONLESS FOR A MINUTE AND LOOKED UP
AT IT. THEN CHRIS & I SAW HER RAISE HER ARMS ABOVE HER HEAD AS IF
SHE WAS OFFERING HERSELF TO IT!! WE WERE BOTH TOTALLY CONFUSED BY
WHAT WE WERE SEEING. WHAT WAS THIS ALL ABOUT? LUISA THEN LAY DOWN
ON THE GROUND WITH HER FACE DOWN IN FRONT OF THE TIKI. WE COULD
HEAR HER CRYING. THEN SHE GOT UP AND BEGAN TO REMOVE HER CLOTHES!
AGAIN CHRIS & I WERE CONFUSED AS WELL AS HORROR STRUCK..LUISA THEN
REMOVED ALL OF HER CLOTHING AND STOOD IN FRONT OF THE TIKI TOTALLY
NUDE. THEN SHE BEGAN TO CLIMB UP ONTO THE STATUE AND THEN UPON REACHING
WHAT APPEARED TO BE ITS ARMS..SHE LAY DOWN IN ITS ARMS ON HER BACK..
HER LONG BLACK HAIR WAS NOW HANGING DOWN THE SIDE OF THE TIKI'S
ARMS.. LIGHTNING AND THUNDER WERE NOW NEARBY AS WE TRIED TO APPRACH
THE TIKI STATUE IN THE HOPES OF SOMEHOW REACHING UP AND GRABBING
LUISA BUT SHE WAS JUST UP THERE TOO HIGH. AT THAT MOMENT, THE RAIN
BEGAN TO FALL VERY HARD AS THE STORM WAS NOW OVER US. CHRI!
S & I RAN AS FAST AS WE COULD TOWARDS THE STATUE WITH LUISA UP IN ITS ARMS..THEN SUDDENLY IT HIT!
IT HIT VERY HARD WITH A LOUD AND DEAFENING EXPLOSION! A HUGE BOLT
OF LIGHTNING HIT THE HEAD OF THE TIKI STATUE BLOWING OFF ITS HEAD!
CHRIS & I WERE BOTH KNOCKED OFF OUR FEET AS WEL AS BLINDED! WHEN
WE WERE ABLE TO SEE AGAIN.. WE LOOKED UP AT WHERE LUISA WAS LYING.......SHE
WAS NOT THERE!..SHE HAD VANISHED RIGHT BEFORE OUR HORRIFIED EYES...
LUISA WAS GONE!!! ONLY THECLOTHES WHICH SHE HAD TAKEN OFF BEFORE
SHE CLIMBED UP ONTO THE STATUE WAS STILL THERE LYING ON THE GROUND..
SCREAMING & CRYING WE BOTH RAN AS FAST AS WE COULD TO GET OUT OF
HERE AND BACK TO WHERE THE OTHER TWO WERE WAITING FOR US. IN HE
FOLLOWING DAYS, A THOROUGH POLICE INVESTIGATION WAS LAUNCHED INTO
THIS STRANGE OCCURANCE..FOR AWHILE WE WERE ALL SUSPECTED OF FOUL
PLAY BUT AS THE INSUING INVESTIGATION CONTINUED IT WAS TURNING UP
NOTHING THAT PROVED ANY FOUL PLAY...RATHER IT WAS LOOKING MORE AND
MORE LIKE AN UNSOLVABLE MYSTERY! IT WAS CLOSED UP A FEW !
MONTHS LATER AS UNSOLVABLE.!
.AND ORDERED NEVER TO BE OPENED AGAIN...IN THE FOLLOWING MONTHS
SOME PEOPLE REPORTING SEEING A GIRL DRESSED IN WHITE ANG GLOWING...AND
IN AUGUST OF THAT YEAR A SPIRITUAL MEDIUM CONTACT LUISA'S SPIRIT...THE MYSTERY WAS NEVER SOLVED..

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